2024年广东省深圳市中考英语作文题目及范文

六、作文

46. 假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下：

1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；

2. 选择这张照片的原因；

3. 参赛感受。

【答案】例文：

Dear classmates,

My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.

The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!

It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!

That’s all! Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；

②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先介绍演讲的主题，即介绍自己在摄影展上获得一等奖的照片；

第二步，介绍照片拍摄的时间、地点以及内容；

第三步，阐述选择这张照片的原因；

最后，表达自己的参赛感受。

[亮点词汇]

①be interested in对……感兴趣

②would like to do sth.想要做某事

③harmony和谐

④take part in参加

⑤realize意识到

[高分句型]

①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引导定语从句）

②If you are careful enough

③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名词+that从句）