2024年黑龙江省中考英语作文题目及优秀范文

83.图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。

提示词： accident, hurt one’s leg, take…to the hospital, visit

要求：

1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。

2. 词数: 80—100之间。

3. 字迹工整， 语法正确，意思连贯， 合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名， 否则不得分。

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【答案】例文

I like playing basketball with my classmates. But last Saturday, I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. My classmates took me to the hospital quickly. The doctor put some medicine on the cut, and then put a bandage around the hurt part of the leg.

During my stay in the hospital, some of my classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork. That’s very kind of them. I will try my best to help others in the future.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；

② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；

③ 提示：图片中写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍自己喜欢和同学打篮球；

第二步，具体阐述上周六发生的事故；

第三步，最后表达对同学的感谢以及今后自己也会怎么做。

[亮点词汇]

①fall down跌倒

②help sb with sth帮助某人某事

③try one’s best to do尽某人最大的努力做

[高分句型]

I fell down and hurt one of my legs badly when we played together. （when引导的时间状语从句）