2024年贵州省中考英语作文题目及优秀范文

第五部分  写作（满分25分）

53. 成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...”（改变让我……）的征文活动。请参考图文信息，积极投稿。

要求：

1. 补全标题；

2. 内容积极向上，不少于80词；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

【答案】例文

The Change Made Me Better

There are many things in our life that can help us to be better. In my opinion, I think my changes have made me better.

I used to be weak because of my bad habits. After communicating with my teacher, I ate regularly every day and took exercise often, so I am strong now. What’s more, I was so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. My teacher advised me to check my answers carefully and develop good learning habits.

These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图；

第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；

第三步，表达自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①In my opinion 在我看来

②because of 因为

③What’s more 此外

[高分句型]

①What’s more, I was so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）

②These good changes made me feel better and brave enough to face new challenges.（并列结构）