2024年安徽省中考英语作文优秀范文

2024年安徽省中考英语作文优秀范文【合肥家教】

X. 书面表达（共1小题; 满分20分）

61. 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。

要点:

1. 活动目的；

2. 灭火器的使用方法；

3. 你的体会。

注意:

1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）

Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. _______________________________________________

【答案】例文：

Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.

When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.

From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是看图作文；

②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时

③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的；

第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法；

最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。

[亮点词汇]

①draw one’s attention 吸引某人的注意

②pick up 捡起

③pull off 拔出

④as soon as 一……就……

⑤put out 扑灭

[高分句型]

①When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly.（when引导时间状语从句）

②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）